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Misfit Laments


This is part of Misfit Island were misfits can post their poems, stories, or whatever and get positive feedback ^_^



Just a few things to remember-

-If you didn't write the poem, please state who did.
-If you did write the poem and you're feeling shy and bashful (awww...) you don't have to leave your name or username.
-Thank you, and enjoy!



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See The Art In Me



-written while i was in iraq.
-Hate, love, death, life, the Cauldron boiling fire in ice framed melting water; Into the depth of wisdom from the depth of desire, come life of hate, and death of love; and angel's bloodied by the faith of demons who took control of hell on earth; While Heavens gate boil in blood of he who came but did not live to see his vision of a paradistic world; All turned disheveled, in the pits of fire, where angel's sing to the one true liar; A world of love full of mortal life, what better vision from a God, a father; With nothing to satisfy us but the blood we gather; Our mother Eve, before the Angel's kneels, buying her way, such things she makes him feel; Into a whole new world such things are for real; But Eden's forbidden for the things we'll steal. Knowledge is power our father forbids, but who is to tell us our don'ts and our dids; Our mother is kneeling for pleasure she gives, such angel's God set, for the life that he lives; The angel God set to guard Eden's door, forgets his true duty for our mother the whore; When he takes her new gates open wide, in sin they go running, but naked they'll hide; The father that failed us knows well what goes on, but because he has failed us, he's lost well gone, done; Who left to brave the wonders of Hell and the evils of Heaven, will Satan or Lucifer take a plunge at the seven? In mystery they're clouded, in numbers they set, if God couldn't help us then Satan forget.


By: LCpl Burgos, Frank
USMC 03/05/27 




By:[polaroid of purity]

Fragile Winter
We dreamed like children,
Innocence so sweet,
unknowing of the cold,
winter surely brings,
watch the patterns the sun may play
while winter takes the life away
Prayers go unheard,
only for today
someday your trust will slowy fade
to gray, like the sky, winter brings
a song of melancholy, the children will sing.




The best poem [Toffee-Thief] is capable of:(Completed and moved from main room)


There once was a cheese-puff named Bob;
He was cheesy and shaped like a blob.
He fit in so well,
I'm sorry to tell,
That he's rather a terrible snob.


*bows* Thank you very much...


*round of applause eminates from corner of room StickyBun inhabits*


What's that noise?? *shrieks and runs from room*



(The tragic story of a true misfit)

Under the Roses~


Vines cover her shame
Her face, the leaves' still frame
A part of the Earth, like a charming stain
She will lay forever, but not in vain
Her heart, the green hath claim
Forget what wretched name!
Her misery and love were slain
She smiles as she embraces the rain
Amoung the thorns, grows her fame
Under the roses, her fears are tame
On the ground she does remain
The once-lonely girl and the Earth's forgotten pain
.. Beautiful...the same


by: [ludageke]

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2004-01-29 [polaroid of purity]: Thank you, Frankie! I love your poems.

2004-01-29 [Zainal]: you actually like this one? i was told i need god more than ever... you think she needs me... hahahaha!

2004-01-30 [polaroid of purity]: Yeah, it's really good, very deep.

2004-01-30 [Zainal]: lol... thanks

2004-01-30 [polaroid of purity]: *beams*

2004-02-01 [cozz]: It's great polaroid!! *claps* Ya did good!! *hands you a muffin*

2004-02-01 [polaroid of purity]: *munch, munch* Thankies muchly!

2004-02-18 [Toffee-Thief]: Great poem, Polaroid! =D

2004-02-19 [StickyBun]: hey polaroid did you write all those poems in your journal too? Those are really good...too bad youve been gone the past 6 days....

2004-02-23 [polaroid of purity]: Aw thankies! I LOVE your poem, Toffee! *sniffles from it's beauty* :) Yeppers, I wrote all the poems in my journal...I'm suprised people reads that crap, but I'm glad you like it! *hugs*

2004-03-06 [Toffee-Thief]: *gasp* Blasphemy! Dare not to call such wonderful poetry 'crap'. *scowls and strokes poem* =P

2004-03-08 [polaroid of purity]: Aw...you're so sweet! *hugs* (it is crap though :)

2004-03-10 [StickyBun]: RAWR!

2004-03-10 [polaroid of purity]: *blinka* <h>MEOW?</h1>

2004-03-10 [StickyBun]: i think you meant

MEOW?

2004-03-11 [polaroid of purity]: *sniff*

2004-03-11 [StickyBun]: lol its ok...*pats you one the back*

2004-03-11 [polaroid of purity]: *sobs* I'm a failure! And you're going to divorce me, aren't you? *runs away and cries so more* (Wow...I'm emotional, arn't I?)

2004-03-11 [StickyBun]: id ne3ver divorce you! like i said in the other wiki, id divorce all of my wives except for you and kanaseria hehe :P but after that I cant play favorites without hurting someones feelings...

2004-03-11 [polaroid of purity]: *sniffles* Really?

2004-03-11 [StickyBun]: you betcha! I never lie! Im like a superhero kinda...teehee

2004-03-12 [polaroid of purity]: O_O A superhero? Do you wear you underwear outside of your pants? Just curious...

2004-03-12 [StickyBun]: all the time! its comfy. XD

2004-03-12 [polaroid of purity]: REALLY? ME TOO! *cough* I mean...heh..no. What do you wear inside your unitard then? O_O

2004-03-12 [StickyBun]: a speedo! in case i have to go swimming. u?

2004-03-12 [polaroid of purity]: Hmm...I'd wear 5 pairs at one time. Two under the unitard thingy, and three on top. Just in case I have an accident ^_^ Heh, joking *looks around nervously*

2004-03-12 [StickyBun]: lol, we get a little over excited sometimes rachel? XD

2004-03-12 [polaroid of purity]: *sniffles* Sometimes...^_^

2004-03-12 [StickyBun]: awww....ikkle perfect rachel as a bladder problem. who woulda thought?

2004-03-12 [polaroid of purity]: *blushes* It's not my fault! *runs away crying*

2004-03-12 [StickyBun]: hey! who made my rachel cry!? *looks around and realizes no one else is around* oh yea...must've been me. *runs after to comfort rachel* come baaaack!

2004-03-12 [polaroid of purity]: *curls in fetal position with sock monkey and gummi bears*

2004-03-12 [StickyBun]: :( i feel so bad...

2004-03-12 [polaroid of purity]: *hands you gummi bear and sock monkey* Don't feel bad!

2004-03-12 [StickyBun]: *hugs you* aww..you shared your socky monkey! thats so sweet!

2004-03-13 [polaroid of purity]: Yep, I have a heart of jello. (mmm...yummy)

2004-03-13 [StickyBun]: mmm...that sounds very tastey...what flavor is your heart?

2004-03-13 [polaroid of purity]: Hmmm...cherry! *rips out heart* Want some? ^_^

2004-03-13 [StickyBun]: *shrieks with both horror and delight* umm...you sure you dont need your heart?

2004-03-13 [polaroid of purity]: *looks at chest* Naw, besides...it's cherry! *munch, munch*

2004-03-13 [StickyBun]: all the same, no matter how much i like jello, i dont think i can bring myself to eat your heart :(

2004-03-13 [polaroid of purity]: Come on! It's fun! *hand out heart to random strangers*

2004-03-13 [StickyBun]: noooo! not your heart! dont give them your heart! They'll only use it to hurt u!!!

2004-03-13 [polaroid of purity]: *blinks innocently* Now why would anyone do that? *continues to hand out heart* Come on! Have a piece! Every one else is! (heehee, I'm using negative peer pressure on you)

2004-03-13 [StickyBun]: *takes your whole heart* if yoru going to hand it out to complete strangers then im going to have to keep it safe for you! *puts your heart in pocket* you must be more carefull

2004-03-13 [polaroid of purity]: ^_^ Ok, will do! *chokes on jello heart*

2004-03-14 [Toffee-Thief]: *gasp* She's choked! Now all of us dwarves have to make a glass coffin and wait for Prince Charming to come revive her... *scampers away to find glass, forgetting to try dislodging the jello*

2004-03-14 [StickyBun]: *dislodges jello* silly toffee :P

2004-03-14 [polaroid of purity]: *gags* Whew, that was fun ^_^

2004-03-14 [StickyBun]: perhaps for you! i was worried sick! *pouts* X(

2004-03-14 [polaroid of purity]: *hugs* It's ok! Happens all the time! *chokes on gummi bear*

2004-03-14 [StickyBun]: NOOOOOOOOO!!!! *dislodges gummi bear too* stoppit! Im not always gonna be around to save you :(

2004-03-14 [polaroid of purity]: Course you are, you're my body guard!!! *sniffles*

2004-03-14 [StickyBun]: but what about when im sleeping?

2004-03-15 [polaroid of purity]: Hmmm....good point. I'll just have to be vunerable then. ^_^

2004-03-15 [StickyBun]: :( hmmm...thats no good. *goes to the store and stocks up on coffee and caffeine pills* no more sleep!

2004-03-15 [polaroid of purity]: NO! Sticky needs sleep...however, all that coffee looks good! *eats coffee beans* Javajavajavajavajavajavajavajavajava!!!

2004-03-15 [StickyBun]: lol! sticky requires no sleep, sticky needs to do his job. hehe, the word java kinda starts to lose its meaning after awhile... javajavajavajavajavajavajava

2004-03-15 [polaroid of purity]: I KNOW!!! lol, I was thinking about that earlier...Yes, Sticky dose need sleep. *hides java*

2004-03-15 [StickyBun]: dnot while there are those out there with the potential of hurting rachel! *dons cape and stands majestically in the breeze*

2004-03-15 [polaroid of purity]: Wow, I feel so special! OooOO...there's this really fun thing on the list of things to do to annoy your roomate...I'm gonna post it in a second.

2004-03-15 [StickyBun]: hehe, okie dokie, *sits patiently to see it*

2004-03-15 [polaroid of purity]: Wear a cape. Stand in front of an open window for about an hour every day. Then, one day, when your roommate is gone, go outside and lie down underneath the window, pretending to be hurt, and wait for your roommate to return. The next day, start standing in front of the window again.

2004-03-15 [StickyBun]: lol, thats hilarious! will youcome be my roommate so i can do that? oh wait...you already know the joke...aw nuts!

2004-03-15 [polaroid of purity]: Sure, I'll still be your roomate! I have a long list with stuff like that...heehee...I like this one to. - Drink a raw egg for breakfast every morning. Explain that you are in training. Eat a dozen donuts every night.

2004-03-15 [polaroid of purity]: Keep a vacuum cleaner in the middle of the room. Look at it with fear for a few days. Then stay out of the room entirely, opening the door only a crack and whispering to your roommate, "Psst! Is it gone?" Throw darts at a bare wall. All of a sudden, act excited, telling your roommate that you hit the bull's eye.

2004-03-15 [StickyBun]: LOL! those are fantastic!!! i cant wait for college!

2004-03-15 [Toffee-Thief]: ...tried the cape gag... my buddy wasn't too impressed though, as it was the first-floor window... o_O

2004-03-15 [polaroid of purity]: Teehee. I used to have all of them in my diary, but it'd take forever to get to all of them...lol.

2004-03-19 [StickyBun]: *dons cape and saves kitten from 3 foot tall tree*

2004-03-20 [Toffee-Thief]: WOW, a new superhero!!! *shoots photos and scampers off to Time magazine*

2004-03-21 [polaroid of purity]: *cries* I want my FluffyLumpkins! *points to kitten*

2004-03-22 [StickyBun]: *has a handfull of saved kittens* umm...which one?

2004-03-23 [polaroid of purity]: The one with the gray ears!!! ( I really did have a cat named fluffylumpkins with gray ears ^_^)

2004-03-24 [Zainal]: everyone should see s phyco!

2004-03-24 [StickyBun]: *hands you fluffylumpkins* awww...i was hoping no one would claim that one so i could take it,

2004-03-24 [polaroid of purity]: *hands Fluffylumpkins back* You can have him! I have 3 more just like him! *pulls three identical cats out of bag and skips off merrily into the sunset*

2004-03-24 [StickyBun]: o_O whoa....

2004-03-24 [polaroid of purity]: Heh...you didn't see that, right?

2004-03-25 [StickyBun]: im not sure...it was kinda wierd...

2004-03-26 [polaroid of purity]: ^_^ Yeah...

2004-03-26 [StickyBun]: cloneing kitties is something we should leave to the professionals, but i do appreciate a free fluffylumpkins

2004-03-26 [Zainal]: so thats why me rascal has three tails!

2004-03-26 [StickyBun]: oh dear...*shakes finger at rachel* naughty naughty

2004-03-26 [polaroid of purity]: *sniffles* But look how cute! *Picks up kitty* :3

2004-03-26 [StickyBun]: awww...no one can turn down that face

2004-03-26 [StickyBun]: awww...no one can turn down that face :(

2004-03-26 [polaroid of purity]: I know! *gives kitty 1000 lb bad of cat nip*

2004-03-27 [StickyBun]: can it eat all of that?!

2004-03-27 [Zainal]: three tails!

2004-03-27 [polaroid of purity]: Yep! *watches kitty with cat nip*

2004-03-27 [StickyBun]: *stares in amazement*

2004-03-27 [polaroid of purity]: lol. :3

2004-03-28 [Zainal]: yep... three.... and i aint looking fer any more oddities from him!

2004-03-28 [polaroid of purity]: What?

2004-03-28 [StickyBun]: i think zainal has been tryin to jump in here for awhile lol :P

2004-03-29 [Zainal]: no by all means go on... i just talking to myself really.

2004-03-29 [StickyBun]: lol alright

2004-03-29 [polaroid of purity]: lol, I like talking to myself.

2004-03-29 [StickyBun]: i dont...i always get in fights with myself, and then i hurt my own feelings...

2004-03-30 [polaroid of purity]: *pats* It's okay, we all have problems...*cough*

2004-03-30 [StickyBun]: *punches self in the gut* thats what you get for talkin bout my momma!

2004-03-30 [Zainal]: and then... on the moon... no moon... there is to a moon!... nope no moon... moon!... go look... no moon... hmmm... moon!... no moon.... i give up... your stupid... *shock*!

2004-03-30 [StickyBun]: ...?

2004-03-30 [polaroid of purity]: *pats* Don't worry Chris, you weren't talking about your momma. *cough* By the way, I like your mood. I love the Smashing Pumpkins. ^_^

2004-03-31 [StickyBun]: hehe, this is the first mood im getting responses to. alot of smashing pumpkins fans out there i guess :P

2004-03-31 [Zainal]: hey will you look at that thier is a moon... told ya... well excuse me fer not knowing... how could you not know... you kept me locked up... where... in your mind... does that mean you dont excist... i do to... nope... who do you think is in control right now?... *d'ope!*

2004-03-31 [polaroid of purity]: Yeah, I love the Smashing Pumpkins...especially "Disarm"...good stuff. And are you okay, Zainal?

2004-03-31 [StickyBun]: he's caught up in the moon :/

2004-03-31 [polaroid of purity]: Oh. Of course....

2004-04-01 [Zainal]: help have diff personality in conrol... shut up moron!... hey you happen to be... i said shut up!... okay you dont have to get violent... dont make... you'll only hurt yourself... damn!... haha! i am good!.... you still wont get help... d'ope!

2004-04-01 [StickyBun]: *eats popcorn* this is more confusing than the matrix...

2004-04-01 [Zainal]: *goes frlying through the room and hits wall* i told you you couldnt do it... how was i suppose to know?... cause i cant do... what does that have to do with it... casue i am you and you are me... so?... so if i cant, you cant either... well i had to make sure... will just leave me alone now?... nope...damn you!

2004-04-01 [polaroid of purity]: *munches on popcorn* Should we help him? *watches Frankie run into a wall* Nah...too entertaining...

2004-04-01 [StickyBun]: hehe hes fine

2004-04-01 [Zainal]: *stands up and shakes head* wow... i my owm person again... *fist hits face* you only wish!... oh yea, i can dogde bullents watch.... hey what are you doing?... one bullet.... no your going to kill us.... two.... *trips and barly misses thirs bullet* ... you moron!... oh, thanks!.... thats it i'm leaving your to wierd fer my taste.... sniff, no body loves me, not even my alter ego, how sad....

2004-04-01 [StickyBun]: *pats Zainal on the back* hehe im pretty sure SOMEBODY luvs you....*walks away whistling* hehe just kiddin, i luv ya pal.

2004-04-01 [polaroid of purity]: I wuv you too! You're a little insane, but that's kinda cool...

2004-04-01 [Zainal]: little.. i not little! *puffs chest out*

2004-04-01 [polaroid of purity]: Sure! ^_^

2004-04-01 [Zainal]: and deflats like a bad tire... okay i 2!

2004-04-08 [polaroid of purity]: lol.

2004-04-09 [Zainal]: who ya laughing at?

2004-04-09 [polaroid of purity]: no 1

2004-04-09 [Zainal]: hmmmm

2004-08-28 [polaroid of purity]: Wow, these are old comments....

2004-08-30 [StickyBun]: *nods"*

2004-08-30 [polaroid of purity]: Heehee...we need some more poems! *makes sad puppy dog face* :(

2004-09-01 [StickyBun]: i havent written a poem in over a month...*sigh*

2004-09-02 [Zainal]: wow very old... why?

2004-09-04 [polaroid of purity]: That's okay...sometimes if you're just not in the mood to write, it's best just to wait, because it's best to write something emotionally honest. I hate writers block though....ick.

2004-09-04 [StickyBun]: *nod* indeed

2004-09-04 [Zainal]: hi?

2004-09-04 [StickyBun]: elllo

2004-09-04 [Zainal]: was gone... never thought i return... gone... ahhhh.... oh ello!

2004-09-04 [StickyBun]: i wash gooone tooo

2004-09-04 [Zainal]: No! really? ya sure?

2004-09-04 [StickyBun]: i dont know...maybe a leprechaun? do you have any gold?

2004-09-04 [Zainal]: i plea the fith.

2004-11-06 [polaroid of purity]: YAY! Thanks, Aubrey!!

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